★ Literature;Poems

Commentary on Poem 3:

Reflecting on:
-the theme that you are exploring in the poem.
-how you developed the theme in your poem.
-the effect/s that you would like to achieve in the poem to impact your readers and how you went about doing it.
-the extent to which you think you have been successful

This poem composed by me tells about the view of the taxi driver of young people nowadays.Also tells about the view of the taxi driver felt about how to success in Singapore. Lastly, it also tells about what he had experienced as a taxi driver, making living for his family and tells more about his family.

I made myself to be the taxi driver in order to develop the theme in my poem.I develop it by telling how hard this driver had gone through to educate well his daughter, not wanting her daughter to become a person who does not obey or mixed with bad guys or girls.

I hope the readers would get the information in which how hard their parents work for them to study.Wanting them to get a good job in future or be well educated.I also hope that they would know how competitive it is now in society as compared to the past time.